Monday, October 27, 2008

A Very Strange Poem Indeed

"Pentachrome" by J. de Burgos is one of the strangest poems that I've ever read. One thing that stands out in my mind when I first read this poem was how she starts each stanza (except the first) by saying "Today I want to be a man". When she says this, I think that she may be a man trapped inside a woman's body (perhaps only for a day since she did specifically say "Today" and not "every day") or possibly a schizophrenic. She talks about how she wishes to be Don Quijote or Don Juan, who are both fictional characters from Spanish literature in the seventeenth and nineteenth centuries, respectively. According to Wikipedia, Don Juan is used synonymously for "womanizer", especially in Spanish slang. Don Juan is also known for seducing women and enjoys fighting their champions. By saying that she wants to be like this man goes against everything that woman during this time period were probably trying to fight for. I cannot tell if this poem was written for shock-value or whether she wrote this from the depths of her heart, hoping to get some strange message across to her readers. It also surprises me that she talks about how she wants to "abduct Sor Carmen and Sor Josefina, conquer them, and rape Julia de Burgos". That's only slightly confusing how she talks about how she wishes to rape herself, unless she truly does want to move into the other's shoes (Don Juan and Don Quijote). This poem may have been written to insult womanizers or other anti-women's rights people at the time, but initially, this poem seems to serve purely as shock value for it's unsuspecting audience.

Sunday, October 26, 2008

What Color? Poem

Observing the poem "What Color?" I find that the author contradicts himself at times or sometimes makes a few points that I find slightly confusing. The author talks about a pastor who has a "white soul". However, they then say that "His skin so black, they say, his skin so black in color." After that they again talk about how (he was) "on the inside snow." I find this point a little confusing though. I understand how white stands for peace (dove) and innocence (generally a blank slate), but I don't understand why the author is making it seem like the pastor on the inside is "white" and that there "wasn't one stain on his impeccable interior." I find the points that he is white on the inside and black on the outside very contradicting. Does the author mean to say that white always stands for good while as black does not? It seems to me that the author stresses the point that this pastor is technically black, but he really isn't since he is white on the inside. I'm not too sure but this poem to me sounds a little racist. Why would the author describe the pastor's soul as (not having) "one stain on his impeccable soul."? Does that mean that if black (or any color not white) stains get on the interior of this pastor, then he is no longer pure or noble? Does this mean that the pastor stands for all things good and evil at the same time? The part that sounds most contradicting to me is the part about "His skin was black, but with the purest soul, white as the snow..." since it should not matter what color the pastor's skin or soul is.